Writing Test 1

Dear Mr. Wilden,

I am writing this letter in order to let you know about the high levels of dissatisfaction my friend and I experienced during the poorly organized show of “Fairplay”, the band that had a one-night-only event at the Grisham Hall last week.

Firstly, we were not informed that this was a “general admission” show, which left us extremely disappointed since we were expecting seats, as the advertisement said. Secondly, the supporting act was oddly long and they hardly left any time left for Fairplay’s show, which did not last longer than 45 minutes. Lastly, despite the hall being new, there was not a single place to buy food or drinks, so by the time the show was over, we were starving.

As you can see, our experience was fairly unpleasant and we do not think it was the band’s fault since they gave us an amazing show despite having such short time left.

In order to make amends for the bad experience, which was caused by the poor organization of GPL Entertainment, we would like to suggest a few actions that you could take into consideration. The first one is refunding my friend and I the full amount of the ticket we bought, or giving us a free pass for the next concert of Fairplay.

Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Faithfully yours,
Paulina Moraga

Writing Task 1: Diagnostic Test

Facilities in the Seafront (Essay)

Unfitting facilities have always been an issue when it comes to cities located next to the ocean. There has been a discussion going on in the radio programme regarding what kind of facilities should receive permission to be built in the seafront. In the following essay, I will discuss and give reasons on the different option available.

The first option we could consider is beach volley facilities and a park. Most of the people are aware that sports facilities should be a priority because it can encourage adults and children to have a more active life. Unfortunately, a downside of this kind of facility is that most of them only work during the summer because people are not used to play beach volleyball or snorkelling during the winter.

The second option would be to build a hotel. The city already has a decent amount of hotels and places to stay for the night, and it is also true that the city does not need any more closed spaces. Nevertheless, a luxurious hotel by the seafront could open up to 50 work positions, while also bringing a richer economy to the city due to the amount of tourists that might be interested in staying the night during their free time.

To sum up, both of these options can be beneficial for the members of the community, but only one of them will have usage during the 365 days of the year. This is why the hotel should receive planning permission to be built in the seafront.

 

Anne with an E (Review)

“Anne with an E” is a Canadian TV show produced by the CBC, starring well known young actors and actresses such as Amybeth McNulty and Lucas Jade Zumann. The show was aired on Netflix and lasted around three seasons until the company decided to cancel it.

The story starts with a young girl with bright orange hair and green eyes who is an orphan desperately searching for a family, which leads her to be a big extroverted who tries to impress everyone with her knowledge, coming off as mildly annoying.

A few episodes later, we get to see how a family mistakenly adopts her because they wanted a boy to help them with the farm, but the orphanage sent them this girl. After this incident, the father of the family tried to give her back, but it did not work because he thought she was way too special and cute to let her go. This is how Anne’s “family life” starts.

The series is set in the late 1890s, which supports this conservative vision that that only men can do hard labour, such as working on a farm.

The reason why I fell in love with this series is because it portrays various topics such as racism, female empowerment, education, gender bias, sexual harassment, LGBTQ+ rights and much more but always keeping respectful boundaries. Also, this series lets us get to know Anne and her family in depth, which is heart warming and nice to see.